This is heat
This is heat
Ayo thx man
This needs a lot of work to say the least, the mastering feels very awkward as most of the song is distorted from peaking and odd frequencies, some of the sections sound very off key, and the song isn't exactly dubstep. There is some charms about this track, it sounds fresh to the ears due to an experimental sound, and the cinematic drums and piano sound nice together. Keep making music!
Okay, i'll be more study about Mixing and Mastering...
And one more thing, this sample i downloaded from Youtube, and i make with FL studio Mobile, so no plugins or sylenth, just a Wav loops that i cut, so the instrument seems different :)
Thx for the information (im not happy about the rate, but im happy about your information)
The intro was underwhelming on my first listen, but it's good for that, the chords that come in fill an emptiness that was provided by the intro, the song has a good cinematic feel. The drums at 1:36 feel like they shouldn't come in out of nowhere, as it sounds forced. The second half of the song (2:15 to the end) sounds much better than the first half in my opinion. The bouncey synths and voicey synth thing sound really good with the piano around 2:17, and the mix of instruments at 2:46 go much better with the drums that come soon after. The way the song fades out with everything still playing is unexpected but erupts a sense of nostalgia for me. Great track man!
Thank you for the amazing review you gave me! I will work on what you said and improve this track and future ones :)
The piano at the start feels like it's too loud / hi-fi, however the melody is very synthwave-y, it could easily be fixed with a parametric eq cutting off the highs and lows making it sound more retro. The drums at 0:49 seem to overpower the synth in the background a bit much, the kick and hats seem a little loud, the melody at 1:02 is unexpected but sounds good, maybe have it come in more lightly? That's all the constructive criticism I can give, the rest of the track is nice and has a very mesmerizing sound!
EDIT: The updates you've made have greatly improved your track! Thank you for listening to my criticism!
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